The white glow here and there really adds a lot to the piece, you've handled the brightness very well. The grain in the middle is a little disturbing, but if it doesn't go with increased quality, I wouldn't know how to fix that, so it's more Apo's fault than yours
And the colour being pink, if it wasn't intentionally done so for ^lyastri, doesn't look very suitable to me. I would try dark gray or brown to see how it comes out.
The overall design is very pretty, and the webby texture looks good on it.
Hope you find that constructive.. I'm sharpening my critique skills on people I know to avoid getting beat up
The storm is pink. I have something to say about that, and what it makes me think, but it would be, well, not suitable for public and all. I do like this, it's spiffalicious!
You know....with you being my Sis....and thinking everything I create looks like....well...YOU know...people are going to start thinking we're southern!
And the colour being pink, if it wasn't intentionally done so for ^lyastri
The overall design is very pretty, and the webby texture looks good on it.
Hope you find that constructive.. I'm sharpening my critique skills on people I know to avoid getting beat up